Hello Velosiped, and sorry for the late answer.
I'm TheShittyWiz head redrawer at DT and here to give you some feedback on the test.
So first things first, you failed the test, there were several major errors throughout the pages. However, most of these errors are also very simple to fix.
First of all, cloning, when you use the clone tool, make sure the hardness is set to 100% if it isn't then the cloning starts to look blurry, an example of this can be seen on the first page,
here's how the trees normally look, and
here is how they look after you cloned them. This was an issue that was present on every single page in the test, so now that it has been mentioned, we won't focus too much on it in the rest of the evaluation. And so, without further ado let's get to the evaluation.
Page 1: You forgot to fully redraw some of the text out, and seemingly forgot about it after whitening it out, example:
before and
after.
Your redraws often look out of place when compared with the original art, for instance,
this or
this wall, the wall drawn by the manga artist uses either a different colour or screentone than the wall you redrew.
Finally, remember that as a redrawer, your job is only to draw in the blanks left by the Japanese characters, you shouldn't touch any art on the page, unless it's strictly necessary for you to fill in the space left by the Japanese characters, take a look at
this wall for instance, that was how it looked in the original page, and
this was how it looked in your version. There are several more instances on the page where you change the art without any real reason to, and this is an absolute no-go as a redrawer.
Page 2: You didn't completely remove the glow around some of the Japanese characters, like
here(before)
after and you also forgot to redraw
this little bit.
Page 3: This page looks good overall, just suffers a bit from the aftermentioned cloning problem
Page 4: You can still see the divide between the two pages
here as it wasn't fully redrawn, and remember to try and preserve the original art,
(before) (after).
Page 5: You seem to have made a mistake while combining the two pages, since a portion of the left image has gone missing in you redrawn version(the girl with long hair lost a bit of her hair and some jellyfish disappeared).
Page 6: You forgot to redraw
this little part, and the cloning above it also looks quite bad.
This screen tone suddenly gets darker even though it should just remain one as the lighter colour.
Page 7: Looks good, except the botched cloning.
Finally, I would like to make two more points.
Firstly, make sure to frequently check you redraws while redrawing, in order to avoid making mistakes, and when you're done take a look at the entire page, look especially close at the places where there used to be Japanese characters, in order to make sure that you redrew everything you had to and didn't forget any parts.
Secondly, at the moment we are only recruit redrawers for two series'
Sprite and
Alice or Alice, if you want to redraw Sprite, you would have to do the full test
with the difficult page, otherwise the only series we can give you is Alice or Alice, which only requires you to pass the easy test. So while I won't stop you from retrying the same pages once more, keep this fact in mind.
Love, TheShittyWiz