All right, you pass! There were some remaining centering issues on pages 3 and 4, but nothing serious and you'll improve with practice.
I've upgraded you to staff and will write you a proper welcome message as soon as I hear from the typesetter who wanted to be replaced if we can give you the next chapter of Shounen Y
right away. You can look around in the staff-only area, make yourself at home, and welcome to Death Toll!
For now, please set your email notification options to be notified when you have a PM in your inbox there: go to the User control panel (the small person icon at the top right, to the left of the envelope), then Board Preferences>Edit Notification Options. On the line "Someone sends you a private message" (the last one), check both boxes.