Redrawer Application for Deathtopia

[RenzereX]

Redrawer Application for Deathtopia

Name: RenzereX
Availability: Should be available when needed. (except for extra stressful periods in life and school)
What Manga You're Interested In: Deathtopia.
Software: Photoshop CC 2015
Experience: None.
Other Groups: None, but may apply for others if I have the time/pique my interest.

It's alright if I fail for this one cuz I just randomly decided to try it out today after reading Deathtopia's Chapter 46 end ad.

A bit of a perfectionist but I know nothing is perfect. Constructive feedback would be appreciated.:)

Submission: https://goo.gl/LyDWjv (tell me if it isn't here because I checked and it is 48MB, but sometimes it says empty folder....)
Individual Files: (in case the above link doesn't work) https://goo.gl/X2uwDt, https://goo.gl/ap7KcG, https://goo.gl/ujKfhT, https://goo.gl/hlZnkb, https://goo.gl/jVbXtL, https://goo.gl/XuyZ5f, https://goo.gl/FgprLR.

Anyways great work guys, keep it up!!:)


- RenzereX

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[Wraith]

Hi, RenzereX, thanks for applying!

I'm afraid this time you don't pass. One of our editors reviewed your PSDs and found problems that will need correction before you can redraw for us:

i. In some pages, he got better results by hiding some of the layers you left in place. This means you don't have a good grasp yet of what looks good and at which point to stop retouching.

ii. You blurred pixels on the background in places, and that made them quite messy.

iii. On page two, you moved the page eight pixels to the left for no apparent reason.

iv. On the capsized boat double spread, there was a part you did not redraw and it appears as a white bar in the middle of it.

v. On the first page, you erased the entire info box. You ought to have removed only the characters, because we want that box in place for the English typeset. Having a good grasp of what to leave in place is as important as knowing what to remove.

I suggest you practice more and welcome you to reapply when you feel you have improved. We have time; the next chapter of Deathtopia that needs redrawing is 50, which we will only release in June, so if you would like to give it another try, by all means go for it, and good luck!

[RenzereX]

Alrights noted!! I shall work on it!! There's still some time and either way I'm enjoying myself with photoshop.:)