answer redrawing test

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Re: answer redrawing test

Postby theshittywiz » Wed Mar 18, 2020 4:23 pm

Hello CuuDen.

I'm TheShittyWiz, the head redrawer here at Death Toll, and am here with an assessment of your test.

First of all, you did not pass the test, while you did show a good understanding of the basic concepts of redrawing, such as linework and cloning, there are simply too many mistakes in the test to pass. Since these mistakes are quite varied throughout the test, I'll make an individual assessment of each page, in case you want to know what I find disagreeable.

10_152: Many areas on this page are left half-finished, which means the white outline from where the text used to be is still visible, two examples would be: raw(https://i.imgur.com/XPcrHFO.png) -> redrawn(https://i.imgur.com/ooGpgYM.png) and raw(https://i.imgur.com/gTTJB9w.png) -> redrawn(https://i.imgur.com/ZtPZj27.png). On top of this, a few areas stand out since they are quite messy or blurry compared to the raw, such as this house and trees(https://i.imgur.com/MOGqyAa.png) and these hills(https://i.imgur.com/uOSnFra.png).

43: While different groups have different policies on this, here at Death Toll we usually keep redrawing to only filling in the black spaces left after all the Japanese text has been removed and never redo the original art unless it's absolutely required. Hence this page simply can't be passed.

101: Overall a good job on this page, both in terms of cloning and linework, however, the colour you used for the linework does not match the one used in the raws. This results in a situation where there's an obvious distinction between the lines present in the raw and the ones you've drawn in.

Cradle_02-03: Once again, a very fine job on this page, only one small thing of note: This little bit of text(https://i.imgur.com/ZNrcIOC.png) is the title chapter and has to be drawn, however, all the of text around it is just the name of the author and series and doesn't have to be redrawn.

Cradle_20-21: Another job well done, the only small thing of note on this page is a slight mistake on the saber-wielding guy's ear, https://i.imgur.com/DrGevAg.png.

Region_03_0040 and Region_03_0041: These two pages are part of a double spread and should be merged.

Region_03_0194: This little indent in the clouds(https://i.imgur.com/nlzzwba.png) looks quite out of place. Beyond that, there is also a blurry border which outline the difference between the patterns in the raw and the areas where you've used the clone tool(https://i.imgur.com/P5gNPv2.png), though it's not the end of the world.

So, that's the overall assessment, the test shows promise, but there are quite a few kinks that have to be worked out before it can be considered a passed attempt. If you are interested, you are of course free to do the test over again, either starting right from the start or simply fixing the mistakes on the pages you sent in the first time, and you are of course also allowed to ask if there's something you are curious about, be it with the assessment or redrawing in general. if you aren't interested, then I would like to thank you for giving the test an attempt and giving us your time.

Love, TheShittyWiz.
CuuDen
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Re: answer redrawing test

Postby CuuDen » Wed Mar 18, 2020 6:04 pm

Hello TheShittyWiz. (This is weird and funny name)

I see all my mistake. Those are result of my push, i tried to finish them as fast as i can. So i skiped some detail. (This is my fault).
I will do the test again carefully. Thank you for spending your time.

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