Hello again, Cuuden.
I'm back again with an assessment of your test, which was a narrow fail this time. Almost all of the issues I pointed out in the last test were fixed and your lineart was rock solid throughout, however, there were still two issues in this test. This time I won't go into close detail about each and every mistake, instead, I'll just point out the overarching issues and if you are interested you can try fixing them.
First of all, there were a few places on "43" were your usage of the clone stamp was quite evident, since there was an obvious blurry border between the screentone in the raw and the one you drew in.
Secondly, as I said last time, we still don't retouch the art on the page, so while I do think your version of "Region_03_0194" looks pretty, it still has to stay true to the original, meaning that the page either has to be redone or, if you can, remove the light effects you added to the page you sent in.
Those two pages are the only ones I still have any grievances with and all the other pages are passed.