Much of what I mentioned for the previous release of Rain
applies to this chapter as well. Rather than releasing quickly, please consider taking more time to perform quality control. For example, your chapter 66 was subtitled as "first part" and your chapter 67 is subtitled as "conclusion", which is an awkward pairing in place of more sensible complements like "first part / second part" or "first part / last part. This shows a lack of basic review.